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Such harsh truth in a poem that still remains truly beautiful is wonderful. The ability to show beauty in cruel honesty is a skill which many hope to learn. The fact that I believe it comes naturally to you makes it all the more impressive. When I think of this poem the song 'Big Yellow Taxi' comes to mind. They both deal with what the world is coming to with beauty fading from the greed of others. While the song shows the physical aspects, your poem shows the more emotional aspects. Although, they both show the truth. Nicely done.

hi Poet friend, ...... True Beauty given by God symbol of honor and respect....... its wonderful poem with reality of life, carry on with your good work....... your poems got a real feelings of touch with nice words..you are a great writer......thanks for sharing 10 +++++++++10

hi poet friend, ...... True Beauty given by God symbol of honor and respect....... its wonderful poem with reality of life, carry on with your good work....... your poems got a real feelings of touch with nice words..you are a great writer......thanks for sharing 10 +++++++++10

i'm feeling that there is a message hidden under the poem, am i wrong? ! thanks for sharing.

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so very nice poem i really like it god job there luwi