I like this - to me the 'quick stroke on the board' is wonderfully ambiguous, giving the poem some depth. 'on the net' to me rang also of 'in the net' again adding wonderful ambiguity. And the 'breathless' makes one go back and re-evaluate your initial reading. Excellent.
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I like this - to me the 'quick stroke on the board' is wonderfully ambiguous, giving the poem some depth. 'on the net' to me rang also of 'in the net' again adding wonderful ambiguity. And the 'breathless' makes one go back and re-evaluate your initial reading. Excellent.