Monday, January 30, 2006

Adverbs Comments

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Under my fingers your name is born
Painlessly –
A quick stroke on the board
Carelessly –
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Lilit Grigoryan
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Martha J. Eshelman-Smith 31 January 2006

I like this - to me the 'quick stroke on the board' is wonderfully ambiguous, giving the poem some depth. 'on the net' to me rang also of 'in the net' again adding wonderful ambiguity. And the 'breathless' makes one go back and re-evaluate your initial reading. Excellent.

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