Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Adventures Of Two Captains_ Rescue A Nice Friend Comments

Rating: 4.8

A dark spirit of tremendous power
Was lurking at the entrance to the gate,
His breath spewing hot phosphoric shower
Cathartic white dots dripping from his face.
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Ellias Anderson Jr.
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Kelvin Owusu 15 April 2013

a fantastic tale enjoyed the read

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 April 2013

Ah an amiable poem written in a fantastic adventurous way. U two build it up together swell!

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Poetheart Morgan 12 April 2013

It is like a tale, about huge waves, captain, sea and all adventures. I like it. Very good.

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Unwritten Soul 12 April 2013

The first stanza so Captain Cur... the next just so blend...WOW i just know them well? ? hahahaha Loved it especially this line -We are here to rescue our good friend Soul- how do you both know i am screaming for Help Help! hahahaha joking...a sharp and beautiful poem and thanks for rescuing my Soul hahaha (joking) _Soul

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

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