A dark spirit of tremendous power
Was lurking at the entrance to the gate,
His breath spewing hot phosphoric shower
Cathartic white dots dripping from his face.
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Ah an amiable poem written in a fantastic adventurous way. U two build it up together swell!
It is like a tale, about huge waves, captain, sea and all adventures. I like it. Very good.
The first stanza so Captain Cur... the next just so blend...WOW i just know them well? ? hahahaha Loved it especially this line -We are here to rescue our good friend Soul- how do you both know i am screaming for Help Help! hahahaha joking...a sharp and beautiful poem and thanks for rescuing my Soul hahaha (joking) _Soul
a fantastic tale enjoyed the read