Adventure Of Confused Mind Comments

I have read some of your work with great interest. You have good ideas and express yourself well in this prose form. All writers go through a phase of confusion. I think, if you add a little discipline, in time you will write good poetry. Irene

Nothing is a stillness where the beauty exist. Confusion is a fun phase in a poetic life. keep going with good work.

NOTHING is sometimes everything..... though its abit of confusing to bring out in words.... lovely confusion..

poem is good.a piece of philosophy.

this is typical of a passing stage each of us experience at some point of time but to give voice to it...well is simply great...

I'm sure every writer has felt that way before. I understand completely and sympathize. GW62

I dream but I can not sleep I scream but I can not weep ................................. this poem is very good, interesting and pleasure to read. you have wonderfully stated the inner state of mind, it is a true poetic venture....... one wants to do so much but fail in the endeavour terribly because of utter confusion... you have managed to arrange the confusion in order and expressed what we all feel time to time. well done keep it up...your lovely poem has driven away the confusion.