Adventure. Comments

It's good. It starts out like some Chinese philosophy of the truth of existence, and closes like a wise saying the local preacher would end his sermon with (a wise preacher, not the regular sort! LOL)

So much symbolism within the poem within the poem... Basically describes the yin and yang, the black and white, which divides even more of this half and half life we live. Favourited, and a 10 for you.

A poem travelling between a static force and a stationary force....The idealogy is unique and description of adventure in reference to the two states of physics is just superb............10/10 Best Wishes Sameer