Adventure Comments

Hi Lawrence, My, you're a prolific poet! I like this one, the story you tell, the truth in your words. Frank

I like this ending, we have the luxury to be lazy and refresh. All the best, Diane

I'm speechless and honored. Thank you Lawrence. Diane

Ladies and gentlemen of PoemHunter.com What Diane Violet has stated in her opening line to me I've snapped up and made it the closing line in this poem! Removing my original line completely!

Suspect and seize the adventure in October if it presents. Wishing you the suspense of adventurism, not sure if that's a word but it sounds good :) . All the best, Diane