... Adultery...A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins Comments

yah, that was straight to the point! ...i dig your direction and intention...you're pretty dang good with words!

I love it. great read!

I LOVE IT EYAN! I FELT THAT =D

absolutely loved it..short yet it sent shivers down my spine..if you read any of my poems, i have adultery down to a tee.10

its really good but all girls open ther legs..lol but great poem

great poem it is very desribable in all ways great job again and very creative keep up the good work

excellent lyric metaphor: ''The tunes of love and lust Creeps within their core Silencing all their morals Rendering these mortals To their emotions'' and excellent poem, thank you for sharing.................10+++++

eye opener.. temptations are just nearby.... sweet and appealing.... 10 Maia

Hey man.. how are you? ? after a long time turn to your page.. after S.L and Windies ate a kangaroo curry! ! ! ! ! ..... hey very good write.. very creative and nice to read.., , very interesting title.. poem didn't disappoint either, .. very good..! ! ! 10.. cheers// best wishes Shan

Initial liners were really good.Well Expressed.