Thursday, June 7, 2018

Adulation Heaped Only On Victors Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cloak and dagger adventurous
Lives we lead are tenuous
Monsters crave gem lode
Ripped from harvest
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Doris Cornago
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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 June 2018

Doris, such a well penned poem....10++++++

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Doris Cornago 08 June 2018

I enjoyed doing this as much as I've enjoyed playing computer games. Thank you for visiting.: -)

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Doris Cornago 07 June 2018

Gamification is a tested training method for invigorating teams. Games are not just an escape, but safety valves, releasing stresses and fueling passions for something greater than daily fare.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 07 June 2018

Duality of expression from smile to victory is wonderfully presented. Structure of this poem is motivational one. es, you are very right. Children are addictive to computer games and this provokes thought...Rating 10 for your poem...10

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Doris Cornago 07 June 2018

Hi Bhargabi. Try any of these computer games and join others in guilds. You will see how your interaction with other races reveal a side of yourself not so evident in real life. Thank you for this insight, too. Delighted. :)

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