I need a man of my own
So I won't be alone
Anymore.
i need a man of my own
...
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A terrific verse, with great flow and rhyming, which speaks with eloquence to unfaithfulness.
Thank you for commenting, Evelyn Judy. He wasn't unfaithful- - he simply went off on his own, like a lone wolf, without explanation. And, MEN think that WOMEN are difficult to understand! : -)
Thank you for commenting, Evelyn Judy. He wasn't unfaithful- - he simply went off on his own, like a lone wolf, without explanation. And, MEN think that WOMEN are difficult to understand! : -)
Your man is roaming? I'm so sorry to hear that. May he and you survive this test and I wish both of you the best for all the rest of your lives!
Actually, this poem is not in the present tense. I'm sure you know that we poets possess the ability to dig deep into our imaginations, as well as to recall past memories, and sometimes we combine or embellish or whatever it takes to produce something worth capturing on paper, that perhaps someone will relate to or identify with. Thank you for reading and commenting!
'Struggle' is an accurate word! Ah, relationship problems. But, they DO make for some interesting poetry. Thanks for commenting, Kostas!
A well penned poem. Truly superb and splendid....5 stars*****