Tuesday, May 15, 2018

Adore Of The Moon And A Star Comments

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In the sky of adore there is a star close to the moon
In this tranquil eve what a sight of beauty and boon

On this delightful moment say something ‘O' Nisar
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Ahmed Nisar
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Jazib Kamalvi 17 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Ahmed. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 May 2018

Moon said to the Star with all modesty and humility Oh my dear, you are my beloved with gracility.....me a candle and you a flame....... nice comparisons and images dear poet. thank u for this poem. tony

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Ahmed Nisar 16 May 2018

Many humble thanks Dear Dr. Tony Brahmin...

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