Friday, February 10, 2006

Adoration Of The Feminine Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the valley of forbidden dreams,
I see my heart explode
At the feet of a Queen;
My pulse rate increases
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Uriah Hamilton
COMMENTS
Austen Bradford 02 December 2006

I love every word, it's beautiful and well done

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Alison Cassidy 26 August 2006

Uriah, this one comes from the soul. Enchanting poem. Hearfelt. love, Allie xxxxxxxx

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Ebone' Ingram 19 August 2006

this one made me realize...that only a few men in life...know Queens when they see them. and you are one of those. i respect that very much. eni da kid

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This piece is, quite simply, magnificent. Heart-wrenching, too. t x

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Anna Russell 14 May 2006

Wow - there are still some good guys left! Where my soul undrapes is one of those wish I'd thought of that lines! Great stuff, really great stuff. Hugs Anna xxx

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Duncan Wyllie 09 March 2006

A story that opens up it's cover and invites the reader in for a real treat.Great write.Love Duncan

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Esther Leclerc 24 February 2006

This takes me to about a hundred places, real and imagined, physical and very physical. Love it.

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Lisa Arnold 21 February 2006

wonderfully written, much enjoyed this write, you are very talented!

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Shannon Chapel 11 February 2006

Oh, Uriah. Your eternal sweetness and shameless adoration will always melt my twitterpated heart. I lie in reverence - smitten and humbled at the foot of every poem You are a true gentleman, and I for one love you for it. Thank you for being you, and for sharing your beautiful spirit with the rest of us. Shannon xoxo

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 10 February 2006

Uriah, This is beautiful, any woman who wouldn't fall at your feet for saying this would have no pulse of their own. -Eila

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 10 February 2006

So beautiful and flowing as if I'm in a dream.....Just to be touched and adored like that :)

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Ivy Christou 10 February 2006

wow... any woman would love to be even half adored as you describe in this poem. great tribute to feminism! HBh

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Mary Nagy 10 February 2006

I love the little pieces of what it is to be feminine that you capture in your poems....the perfumed blouses, the tinkling of bracelets etc. I love how you see the beauty so clearly. Sincerely, Mary

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Sweet Seven 10 February 2006

ooooohhh... feel so great to be feminine and adored =P

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Gina Onyemaechi 10 February 2006

Hey, Uriah, sing this beautiful, passionate, enrapturing piece of writing to Miss X and tell me if she doesn't let you make love to her on the spot! ! ! : -) Warmly, Gina.

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Joy Vanderhelm 10 February 2006

Absolutely adored it, Uriah. A very romantic and alluring pull into the musteries of the heart and just how enraptured people can get in them.

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***** ********* 10 February 2006

A loving flowing dream Uriah, you are certainly going in the right direction of make it come true with this wonderfully romantic poem of yours. 10 from Tai, with dreams always in her minds eye.

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