In the valley of forbidden dreams,
I see my heart explode
At the feet of a Queen;
My pulse rate increases
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Uriah, this one comes from the soul. Enchanting poem. Hearfelt. love, Allie xxxxxxxx
this one made me realize...that only a few men in life...know Queens when they see them. and you are one of those. i respect that very much. eni da kid
This piece is, quite simply, magnificent. Heart-wrenching, too. t x
Wow - there are still some good guys left! Where my soul undrapes is one of those wish I'd thought of that lines! Great stuff, really great stuff. Hugs Anna xxx
A story that opens up it's cover and invites the reader in for a real treat.Great write.Love Duncan
This takes me to about a hundred places, real and imagined, physical and very physical. Love it.
wonderfully written, much enjoyed this write, you are very talented!
Oh, Uriah. Your eternal sweetness and shameless adoration will always melt my twitterpated heart. I lie in reverence - smitten and humbled at the foot of every poem You are a true gentleman, and I for one love you for it. Thank you for being you, and for sharing your beautiful spirit with the rest of us. Shannon xoxo
Uriah, This is beautiful, any woman who wouldn't fall at your feet for saying this would have no pulse of their own. -Eila
So beautiful and flowing as if I'm in a dream.....Just to be touched and adored like that :)
wow... any woman would love to be even half adored as you describe in this poem. great tribute to feminism! HBh
I love the little pieces of what it is to be feminine that you capture in your poems....the perfumed blouses, the tinkling of bracelets etc. I love how you see the beauty so clearly. Sincerely, Mary
Hey, Uriah, sing this beautiful, passionate, enrapturing piece of writing to Miss X and tell me if she doesn't let you make love to her on the spot! ! ! : -) Warmly, Gina.
Absolutely adored it, Uriah. A very romantic and alluring pull into the musteries of the heart and just how enraptured people can get in them.
A loving flowing dream Uriah, you are certainly going in the right direction of make it come true with this wonderfully romantic poem of yours. 10 from Tai, with dreams always in her minds eye.
I love every word, it's beautiful and well done