Thursday, May 14, 2009

Adorable Chocolate... Comments

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Adorable chocolate...
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hazem al jaber
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poppl 09 November 2017

pooooooooooooooooooooooo

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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2015

The sweet, delicious and succulent taste of chocolate well depicted in the poem. No wonder many people crave for it. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Char Pattrick 26 September 2009

Nicely written, makes me think of fondue.

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Ewa Espling 05 September 2009

.. I feel the beutiful tase of a pice of chocolate om my lips when i read your poem ... so beutiful written on a subject so close to my heart as chocolate...... tanks a lot sincerly Ewa

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Bright Rose 19 May 2009

that was TASTY, brilliant idea, so creative keep it up :)

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DaNa XxX 16 May 2009

mmmmm very delicious and sweet poem....Certainly 10 from me! ! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

What a nice poem: 'melt me as a sweet candy... sweet chocolate...' 10++

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Joseph Poewhit 14 May 2009

Chocolate came from some vendor

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 14 May 2009

What a seductive treat! For anyone who enjoys chocolate in all its many varieties. Nice.

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