Thursday, May 1, 2008

Adopted Merriment Comments

Rating: 5.0

An old widower feared of life childless
Adopted an adult twenty four, age mindless
Play-God of Tholvillimangalam was the witness
Expected invitees we a chit parentless
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Indira Renganathan
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 08 October 2009

another typical indian subject...it is being done for convenience too read my poem 'am not just a drop'

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Saadat Tahir 18 June 2009

methinx...indiraji is very clear what she has conyed.... there could be ineterpretations....yes but the here and now....is reflective and shows us our face sensitive subject...sensitive heart to pick it up... great lines cheers

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Sandra Martyres 16 March 2009

Your choice of subjects is amazing....it carries so much depth and I agree with Yoonoos - it can be read and understood at more than one level

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Seema Chowdhury 29 October 2008

very nice poema dn very catchy title. pl see my new poems 1. Girls are like roses... 2. The color of emotions

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Chitra - 30 August 2008

a very sensitive issue beuatifully handled here adopted merriment, the title too is so very apt touches the soul!

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