Sunday, August 2, 2009

Adopted Comments

Rating: 4.5

i was adopted at my birth, they paid my mother
what they thought it was worth. (medical bills)
she said that she could not care for me
she was too young and wanted to be free.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2009

now i have two mothers with whom i could share my love, and it was given to me from the LORD up above. it has double joy for two motheres and kid too. only lucky persons have it... i loved the idea.....10 read mine o, mother....hair n hustle and is marriage forced porstitution?

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 03 August 2009

blessed one to have two mother like lord krishna..............a good write...........

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Kranthi Pothineni 03 August 2009

Well painted emotions. Touching wrte.

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god never adopts us, we walk away.. Imagine how our daddy feel when we do... this is nice.

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Christine Kerr 02 August 2009

There are so many different stories that deal with adoption, Feelings that I can only imagine. It's so sad that some think they are from the begining of their life and others don't learn till later.

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Deborah Cromer 02 August 2009

My Aunt found her baby after many years. Big Love. The family opens up and grows. Your poem touches on a most sensitive, personal adventure. There is a whole world involved. You are able to write about some of the most deepest feelings felt. I feel your words. DC

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 August 2009

beautiful and touching tale of an adopted girl...emotions flow along well

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