Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Adolescence Comments

Rating: 5.0

I used to sit on my floor and cry
listening to the radio
thinking about all the people I have never met
the love I will never know
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Leah Ayliffe
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 May 2019

this is a common feeling as transformation takes place in the genes of all young teens we all have through such feelings been

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Daniel Brick 02 February 2016

This is a very brief poem about a pattern of behavior you long ago transcended: You liberated yourself from whatever inner or outer constraints were holding you back.

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Connor Whyte 27 January 2016

This is so sad but deep I really like this piece, I know where you are coming from I spent 4 long years working this same job and everyday I felt I was wasting my time and my life so I changed it and found the beauty in life and in myself. Great write you really know how to express emotions and being.10+

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Leah Ayliffe

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