Saturday, November 7, 2015

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If ever I write a book on my life,
And pen my days in this world of strife,
Some half done deeds, some fulfilled aims,
My sweetest songs, my saddest strains,
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Vinti Jetley
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Nidhi Agrawal 22 July 2017

Lovely poem. Sincere and heartfelt.

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Rajnish Manga 07 November 2015

I am reminded of 'Autobiography of an unknown Indian' by Nirad C. Chaudhary. I wish your resolve to write a book is materialised. Thanks.

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Shakil Ahmed 07 November 2015

you have penned very beautifully, the ending lines are very beautiful- No mastered word, no sublime goals, But I promise to write with my heart and soul! thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments

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Liza Sudina 07 November 2015

Nice and sincere poem, made me smile.

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