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Thy eyes shine, comely; O Rose,
Thou art mine, love me!
By heart and soul and be close
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Wow.wonderful poem...Each lines to romantically penned. Loved reading it.
im speechless my friend......simply amazing piece of poetry...
Beautiful written, wonderful style that confer elegance to your verses..Cristina Teodor
im speechless my friend......simply amazing piece of poetry...
Simply majestic! To write such words of beauty, you must surely be in love... She must surely be admirable, as your poem reflects that adoration. A beautiful poem with exquisite words, my friend.
Classy write, it feels like written in past centuries...I love this style and the content it played..and admiring this poetry, you have wonderful skill Vipins..keep it up..Traditional feeling with modern heart! 10++++++++++_Unwritten Soul
extraordinary poem, vipin, carry on.. i enjoyed reading your poem....