Adlestop Comments

i loved this poem, keep the good work.

Sense of nostalgia amidst the trip nothing more serene just this subtle moment in your own world best showed

What a nice piece of work... beautiful...... i have no words to say, , , , , , very nice

nostalgic, , emotive in tone..a remarkable, transfromational journey! !

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wowwwwwwww Sanjib, Your an excellent writer and this poem of yours shows your great ability as a powerful writer. I wish I could write like you surely a tenner from meeeeeeeee anjuuuuuu

nice work-you're very creative-love the poem

an amazing and crreative poem. voted10 surya

Very nostalgic. Strength for your creative journey, my friend. You were in good poetic voice in this one. Kind wishes, Sandra

narrative! It happens to every one..... Oh I wish I can compose a poem in appriciation to this poem, but...Alas! I cannot write as good as you (do) thank you for sharing..I liked it a lot

such a beautiful interesting narrative piece.......well done! ! !

and so nostalgic i am for i am not dead since 1954. nice!

that train station is that point in time, when you got to open your mind. this is a good write of beauties past, that will always last. a ten

a good description. I visualized a clear scene.

I went along on this train trip to Adlestop with you and enjoyed the trip. Good write. God Bless and God Speed. Lynn

nice narrative poem and descriptive at the same time, thank you for sharing.......10++++++

An interesting poem of 'Adlestop' a empty train station. The train made a sudden halt. The narrator's mind halted to thoughts of natural beauty and his parents. Some time our thoughts veer off in another direction to remembrance of parents and natural beauty. I enjoyed this poem...a 10

Interesting story---

Thank you for the invite. Interesting to read, at the beginning you painted this playful, colorful lines and at the end you used your imagination to unveil Adelstop!

thats really pretty. moments like that are so inspiring. i love it when im somewhere and doing the usual thing and i become instantly inspired for no reason. its amazing.