Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Aditi In A Dream At Wollongong (A Poem For My Daughter) Comments

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That evening jogging on the beach with my friends
miles and miles away from home i was alone

the sea was rolling and unrolling its carpet of blue and grey
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Sunil Uniyal
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Sandra Fowler 12 August 2008

Your mind has painted a fine dreamscape. I like your starched white seagulls and your gray blue sea. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra

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Subbaraman N V 06 March 2008

A great write! Very pleasing to read! Thanks for sharing!

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Fred Babbin 24 December 2007

I have had dreams like that.

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Sunil Uniyal

Sunil Uniyal

Lucknow / India
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