Friday, August 29, 2008

Adios Mi Amigos Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sing me not a mournful song,
Read me not a sadful poem,
Cry me in a joyful tune,
'Cause now I'm goin' home.
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Juneil Sechico
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Miriam Maia Padua 18 July 2009

wonderful...and touching... lines are very captivating... but why adios? leaving the world of poetry or leaving any feelings.... whatever,10+++ lovelots, maia

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Krishna Baalu 31 January 2009

wonderful the way you have written it is commendable! My kudos the only thing i am confusing is witht the title i hope you explain me when u find time pl kb

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Jose Murguia 13 January 2009

i like the topic the words chosen here are very perfectly thought out a 10!

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Ben Gieske 13 January 2009

Reads with a nice rhythm and I can empathize with you and your feelings about this world and its carry ons. He gives us hope and new life. May you always find peace in that.

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Meggie Gultiano 12 January 2009

adios amigos..por que? Oh, your words are powerful, reaching up to the sky..But i do love this..i love your first line....

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Erika Sama 10 September 2008

wahahah..i love the title...it's in spanish! the first line rocks..

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Fay Slimm 04 September 2008

I love the first line - sing me not a mournful song etc. You have a way of wearing your words on your shirtsleeve, and therefore attract the reader to share in your imagery.

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Juneil Sechico

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