Sing me not a mournful song,
Read me not a sadful poem,
Cry me in a joyful tune,
'Cause now I'm goin' home.
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wonderful the way you have written it is commendable! My kudos the only thing i am confusing is witht the title i hope you explain me when u find time pl kb
i like the topic the words chosen here are very perfectly thought out a 10!
Reads with a nice rhythm and I can empathize with you and your feelings about this world and its carry ons. He gives us hope and new life. May you always find peace in that.
adios amigos..por que? Oh, your words are powerful, reaching up to the sky..But i do love this..i love your first line....
wahahah..i love the title...it's in spanish! the first line rocks..
I love the first line - sing me not a mournful song etc. You have a way of wearing your words on your shirtsleeve, and therefore attract the reader to share in your imagery.
wonderful...and touching... lines are very captivating... but why adios? leaving the world of poetry or leaving any feelings.... whatever,10+++ lovelots, maia