Tell me you won't cry
If I have to say goodbye
Keep your hanky dry
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Hey Juneil you're too young to contemplate your mortality. Enjoy your youth. Good day.
Sentiments we all feel and can identify with in some way. Solitude, to be free, gratitude, beholding beautiful things, reading good poems. You chose an interesting way to present all of these.
i like it. the extended senryu.. great