Adieu Comments

spent most my life in a place called ocean city, nj-so in a way i get both points.

this reminds me firstly of a portion of the book ' prophet'-Gibran, and then of ' the old man and the sea' - Hemingway. I can't say that I get your personal meaning, but I can say I find my own in it. Ahh the beauty of poetry, it takes many shapes....well done.

You end your poems alot like I do. I like that :)

I understand this one now...but I won't spoil it for the others. Very good symbolism!