Through the clamour of distressful days
I live alone in soulful memory of my Love
In vain, I keep my door ajar
For her light footsteps, once more to fall
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So poignant! Longing for your loved one and grieving the loved absence. Beautifully expressed!
A sweet poem in memory of someone who left for the paradise at a very young age.
So beautifully depicted the anguish, pain and reunion and each word adorned with gold having greater feeling makes the piece outstanding.........Valsa.......great write
Wow. Beautiful poem...Loved reading each lines...So beautifully expressed...Pain, agony and reunited..Loved reading it.
The extreme love and agony felt by the lover is graphically and poetically described which is admirable. .A BEAUTIFUL POEM.
Gorgeous! so delicately put with such thought and obviously so much adoration....tyvm karen
My hefty bagagge on these weak shoulders, just a line which strikes chords and visuals, overall though the poem is written with finess and beautifully compiled tyvm karen
Wow! ! ! ! 'tis such an amazing poem! ! ! ! I can live through this lines...... Poetry is at its best time once again with this marvellous poem..... I adore your poetic talents! ! ! ! ! ! !
Love. agony and past memories have been touchingly expressed in this poem. It may be cited......... I, now await the fading of the night For yet another new dawn to break To begin life all over anew To be united evermore with my dainty Love Till then… till we are one Adieu! Adieu my little Love! ! Beautiful poem.10