Adieu Adieu Comments

i miss these things.. very short poem but life-sized and eternal. just dropped by for some readings.

the inevitable final 'goodbye' to life...wonderful piece Sonya...creative to the core...thanks...10

Surprise ending Sonya - - and what a wonderful discovery to find this tender and lyrical poem is a tribute to the humble flower.... without which this earth would be a far darker place - - thank you..; ..10 + + + Fay

Strong and awesome. Keep writing!

Your final line is as astonishing as it is brilliant. Those two words turn the poem from something very competent into something sublime. I am impressed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

It is a truly beautiful poem, Sonya...spellbinding. N

I love the way you connect the beauty and light of a flower to the light force of the whole Universe. A beautiful and enigmatic one, thanks for sharing, Sonya. Yelena M.

This lyrical little poem is mysterious, beautiful and has mystical aura of déjà vu - all in so few words - a marvellous feat! S :)

A very delicate piece Sonya....which gently reminds us of life's eternal strife...

Fragile, lyric beauty. The fall of even one flower diminishes the earth. Very touching. Love, SandraX

A beautiful poem, sonya; and what about twilight, dear? ? ?

This is beautiful in that way that seems you've read it many times before..also it sounds like a song. I love your description of the eternal battle always going on.