Wednesday, November 11, 2020

Adieu Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now the end has come
But why must you depart,
When there is still space in this world
For another Kindheart?
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Hannatu Pqrs
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Ifeanyi John Nwokeabia 02 December 2020

It's pathetic to loss dear one. Beautiful piece!

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Hannatu Adamu 03 December 2020

Glad you thought so. Thanks for stopping by!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 November 2020

A poignant and touching poem Well conveyed.

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

I'm glad you found it so. Thanks.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 11 November 2020

Amen. I hope writing the poem helped to ease the heartache

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Thankfully, it's fictional. Thank you for your comment.

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Varsha M 11 November 2020

A very sad melancholic poem with encaptivating impending adieu never desired or cherished yet we all at times have to face them.

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Yes indeed. Goodbyes are often so. Thank you.

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