Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Adieu Comments

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My time has come and I'm prepared
My unknown journey has me frightened a bit scared
I pause for a moment to obtain that last glance
But the time is upon me and tis time for my advance
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David Paradine
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 05 November 2015

Reality of life well written.

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David Paradine 08 November 2015

Thank you.........brief but hopefully to the point

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Souren Mondal 05 November 2015

''[...]But the time is upon me and tis time for my advance Away I must go, leaving behind Family, friends and moments of that short spent time[...]'' A very saddening and melancholic thought David.. Thanks for sharing...

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David Paradine 21 November 2015

Thank you............sad yes but hopefully real

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