Adieu Comments

Well conceived and elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A lovely creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

The stately moving lyricality and the deeply felt feelings of this poem are stunning! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Very well written, though pensive. It sounds nice and promising. I like it, your rhythm and rhyming is nice. Good luck and keep writing.

The fragrance of emotions and colors of love have made this poem a touching beauty..........10

What a poem of great romance. Young people will surely love this.

Poem as a whole lovely and concluded fantastically with great hope - Each time you think of me, just pray, Let tears not come to eye....And I promise you my dear We'll meet before I die. what can be more if this is the flame within thank you Shabeeh :) I opt for max rating

Delightfully written and a very good read. Thanks

The one who writes a poem that has a perfect prosody, a subtle message, harmony of vowels, rhythm, music, this is a real Poet! To add line after line and call it a poem, this I do not admire...I need to feel the thrill of rhyming poetry, the one true lost Art. Thank you for such beautifully written poem and I wish you good luck! Maddalena

No separation in union, and we are united, fine love.