Friday, October 24, 2014

Adieu! Comments

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I have to bid adieu
To my neighbors first
Then to my friends old and new
Because tonight I have a visitor
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RAJESH.C BOSE
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Geetha Jayakumar 30 October 2014

A Wonderful write from beginning till end. Bidding the final adieu is really painful for the near and dear ones. our thoughts travels a lot before bidding adieu to each and everyone. But it's true people love to remember the sweet memories of loved ones before bidding bye for the last time. Once again a Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 29 October 2014

Bidding final adieu to near ones is always a pain for the departing one and the death of a dear one is a rude shock for his close family! Some may be happy in their heart of hearts though they put on an air of grief! But always for a mother, to accept the departure of her child is so very difficult! You have whimsically created a moving scene! Great write!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 25 October 2014

Loaded with suspense, thrill and victory....victory over evil in the hands of mother the all time saviour.......very nicely crafted.......I like it very much.... great imagery........a tenner from me

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 October 2014

Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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