Wednesday, July 16, 2014

Adieu Comments

Rating: 4.2

It's the time of his departure
A sense that take beneath the heart
Though it's for a short span
It made her lament and she faded
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Amitava Sur 19 July 2014

A heart touching expression of sunset under the back drop of intense love. He sinks to her tears As he don't want to depart her....... loved it

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 July 2014

Lovely love poem. Beautiful flow of words...It was the start of a lovely dawn………..! This means the new sun rising brings the hope of meeting again. Loved it.

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Being thus disengaged they bid adieu with a view to meeting again..................very much symbolic of a quiet sunset...................

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Valsa George 16 July 2014

A metaphoric description of a sunset..... Enjoyed!

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Akhtar Jawad 16 July 2014

Love appears in many ways, the orbiting of earth around sun is also a love. a lovely write.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 July 2014

Love appears in many ways, the orbiting of earth around sun is also a love. a lovely write.

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