Tuesday, June 27, 2006

Adieu Comments

Rating: 2.9

There were seasons of laughter.
There were seasons of tears.
There were seasons of hope,
And seasons of fears.
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Lesa MRK
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Alison Cassidy 27 July 2006

Lesa, This one is so sad...The reader feels your pain and hurt and the emptiness that a 'seasonless' world describes. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Grace Hays 28 June 2006

Lesa, I like this poem. It reminds me of the good times I have had. The heart is the only part of us that can truly put words together like this. Beautiful writing. Always & 4ever, Grace

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Preeti - is here! 28 June 2006

the season may not appeal to you, but this is a nice poem! though would have been good if it had ended on a positive note! ..but the decisions upto u! Preets

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Aashish Ameya 28 June 2006

its nice Lesa, but lets don't give up hope, soon good seasons will be back.lets write poems about good things

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