Sankara knew where to go
Yet he walked miles to go.
He reached Narmada River,
That overflowed with water.
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this is well presented..if we look properly what is his new name? ...it looks like your name dear raj...lavs it...naizz
Fine rhymes and diction....well structured poem...insightful craft till the end...10
A charming use of simile. Something very inspiring in the phrase that the boy's face was bright like sunlight. An enchanting story, Rajarram. Warmest regards, Sandra
a bright face like the sun light lit in many hearts a wisdom.....lovely share sir
Beautiful. Written with words of strength and wonder. Each line offers good feeling. Your poetry is divine. DC