Addressed To Your Heart..... Comments

A wonderful heart to heart presentation from JJ

You have expressed the love you feel. It flows from your soul and I can feel it. Wonderful verse. Best wishes suzan

Jibin, I can see why this poem is in the top five hundred. This is an amazing tidbit of warm tidings. It's very sweet, and the flow is wonderful. For some reason, I keep imagining a box of chocolates - then the more I think about it, the more I can see little heart shaped pieces in this container held fast with ribbon and bow. The sweet delight inside, is you. Wonderful. -L.C.

Jibin, who wouldn't like a letter like this? beautiful/sweet/cute! Preeti

Utterly delightful. An excellent flow throughout the poem, and it was rather like losing oneself in a fabulously delicious creamy confection. I can taste it just reading this one. Applause! ! ! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Very cute. lol. It works on the women because it made me smile! Good job, Joseph.

Emotionallly over rated.....like eating huge amount of choclotes......

This is an excellent write. The choice of metaphor and its handling reveals a masterly touch. All aspects of love is included in such a few words. Beautiful poem.

a lovely poem, Jibin... i like the choice of the metaphor here and its well-sustained... the poem is succinctly eloquent! best wishes... Asma...

Wonderful. Expressed so much of love in a few lines. Write more.

a very beautiful and different poem with all the love filled in that....with very few words you can express a lot...well done

Jibin, did we all get invited to the party here? A lovely little poem, most sweet and loving. HG: -) x

Very swett and nicely worded, Jibin. Whether the parcel metaphor would be better served by 'wrapped in' rather than 'covered with' I leave to you.

Thank you for asking me to read this write, Like Sandra ten was no problem, I keep it in my favorite, I may use on feb 14 to send it as a e-poem card, Very well writtin jibin, It gave me some nice fellings of love and their similies. :)

What a charming poem, Jibin. A perfect valentine. Ten without hesitation. Warm regards, Sandra

A nicely chosen metaphor that makes for a neatly crafted little poem. Someone ought to love to receive it :)

This is very romantic and very organised at the same time. It hits the spot exactly Jibin. Good quality writing. All the bases covered very precisely. jim

Joseph, thanks for letting me know - this is a very sweet poem, well done. Esther : ]

Excellent poem Jibin.......enjoyed very much! ...............All the best, Diane

Wow...that is a fabulous poem...I love it, good job keeping writing poems like this