You're worse than a drug,
I'm addicted to you,
I need you with me all the time,
I go crazy without you.
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Yes, great metaphor. An addiction is a terrible thing. Cool stuff, don't stop!
you are so young and yet your work is beautiful. this is excellent......love Yonela
Addiction - yes, a great metaphor for love. Your poem is written with great passion and honesty. Look forward to more. love, Allie xxxx
Man, this is another oustanding poem I have read from you Amie! Excellent write. Always, Linda
hey there, i understand what u meant by this poem but i also feel the same way but for a different reason. well done