Saturday, July 18, 2009

Addiction Comments

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She moves in closer,
And slowly you bag
Away from her.
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Jazmin Nakia Blackwell
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Bob Blackwell 21 January 2010

Excellent poem, shows us how we must never give in or we become hooked.

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Jada Barnes 25 July 2009

Such passion and depth to be infatuated with a lover is a dangerous game. The feeling of being lost in a dark place were there is no light.

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Siddharth Singh 24 July 2009

well and truly addictive.

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Patrick A. Martin 23 July 2009

What a fantastic description of addiction and captivating just like the suject matter. Jazza you beautiful flower I believe you may be one of the most valuable in the garden of God's life force A thousand blessings to you and a TTTTTTTTTTen as well

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