Addiction Comments

eaves and flowers reach up to the sun, drown in a thick and deceiving shallow grave tape around her mouth.......................wondeful write by imagery with imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

I'd love to be in your window box, when my time is done the chemicals of my metabolism, we will feel as one from bud to gestation, watch for me my dear American rose, that bloom maybe I, I fear!

when a life is planted in the ground there are no words too be found. another good write! a ten

very nice imagery...enjoyed it even tho it is a bit disturbing...sometimes the best poems are...

Great dark write,10.

Very unnerving and dark good write 10++