What can I do, what can I say,
to take your pain and fears away?
I feel so helpless as you know,
fearing each day, till the end of your show.
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This poem is so good i have no words to explain it. Its more than great...but that's the only word of I can think of right now. Excellent job...
Well stated. As you indicate, nothing can be done until the person is willing to accept help. Only then can help from others come. This most likely has to be help from others. God works not directly but through others.
Very well written. It touches on the hopelessness and frustration we feel when watching our loved ones torn apart by this demon. It shows clearly the only true solution~ God.
The words just flow off your tongue. This poem has alot of meaning to it. If its an experience you have had, you captured it well.
I know a thing or two about having to watch by the struggle against personal demons...unfortunately we can't fight for our friends or loved ones.
i like it, it seems like something i would write except your way more...complex. it really speaks to me! thanks for the comments! ! : D i think i know you!