Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Addiction Comments

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Why am I letting addiction show through?
I tried to think just pure thoughts towards you
With a hop in your step, sparkle in eye
The moments under table are the ones I deny
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Alyssa Rieper
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Alyssa Marquardt 30 May 2009

wow. I love the rhyming and you have wonderful metaphors. I like it a lot :)

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