Addiction Comments

I have no words to say about this awesome poem.....10.

lines make one to think whats goin on this day to day life....much true....last two lines simply awesome.....sebastine....10+

'Addiction doesn't care, it cries and moans Some are lost, never to be found They could not escape Hell's horrible hound' An amazing composition. 10 from me.

Yes, though understand the risk of addiction may get more moan but will be unavoidable, you provided enough rhymes so well so I offer 10.

A profound summary of addiction Linda. A ten.

Linda, this poem very concisely states an important truth.

This is a very good poem. It is concise, focused, uncomplicated, wuth good rhythm and rhyme qualities. If deserves a ten. So, that's what I gave it. GW62

Destroying others lives, not just your own Addiction doesn't care, it cries and moans. ....great lines...... Fahim