Thursday, March 23, 2006

Addiction Comments

Rating: 4.8

The wanting is restless
Toes tapping, fingers rapping
Against the hard table surface.
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Sydney Daniels
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 05 April 2008

i craze for more.....from u....

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Elizabeth Castleberry 04 April 2006

Nice imagery and flow

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Theresa Rayman 26 March 2006

Excellent piece! I especially like the terse, staccato tone you have used here. It adds to the great imagery. Blessings-TGR (Theresa)

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Patricia Gale 23 March 2006

Yes, how I do recall. Nice job Syd you placed it all in a few little lines! Patricia

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Sam Finley 23 March 2006

hmm strong words fighting to hold back its very nice keep up your work and i'll have to do the same very nice piece though heh yeah go go go

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Gershon Hepner 23 March 2006

Addiction to desire? Very powerful, best Gershon

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Sydney Daniels

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