Addiction Comments
generosity from your body has been drained
the honey sucked from a flower after an early morning rain
hath been replaced by a vile and putrid juice
when I look at you, I see a depserate life pleading for truce
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this is a great poem, the language, the way it flows, the meter...keep it up
...tres good and getting better - keep it up, as the actress said to the bishop
yeah wow. metamorphic crystal and leaf combined...nice! great insight. easy flow.the first line is powerful! great poem. peace, darby
wow. that was awesome. love your use of diction. keep it up, keep it real.
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7/24/2025 6:31:10 PM # 1.0.0
i' m addicted to your philosophical writes...............