Tuesday, September 27, 2011

Addiction Comments

Rating: 4.0

if you were my drug
id take you every day
just so i can waste away
if you stay at the bay
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Alookh (matin) 27 September 2013

fantastic! ! ! ! ! .......................................................................................

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Chris Blazo 02 October 2012

Short and to the point. Good one! Love is like a drug.

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Eindaray Kyaw 10 September 2012

really vivid imagination that is created by a great poet.....I enjoy this one! !

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Neela Nath Das 09 March 2012

Ah! What a poem! Short, but deep.. Eagerness with innocence.

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Pheko Motaung 06 March 2012

A majestic meaningful poem! Thanks for sharing

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Ninja Soul 14 February 2012

Short simple poem with a lotta meaning behind it.

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Hope Anderson 25 January 2012

thats really good.....

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Jinal Oswal 23 November 2011

Aha! ! Simple, cute write :) Reminds me of Enrique's song 'Addicted' :)

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Shadow Girl 22 November 2011

Very nice, meaningful write...love can be addictive. -SG

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Unwritten Soul 21 November 2011

If love is a drug i am sure no police will prison the love addicts..hahahaha by the way it is good poem. keep write more-Unwritten Soul

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 20 October 2011

wow that was really good great job

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Emily Angel 15 October 2011

Nice write.....You've expressed your love beautifully...

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nice poem. it was short and sweet, i really enjoyed the rhyme in the poem. well done :)

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