Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Addiction Comments

Rating: 3.0

How many times
You could inject on my being
O, thirst my spirit
And squeeze my blood.
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Neethu Prasanna 27 March 2013

It is really a deep emotions fortified with your style of writing! And I liked the sentence of self pride too which won't allow us to kneel down

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Great! ! Very deep indeed that's a strong message pened there

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Jacqui Broad 04 November 2011

This is so strong and powerful... Enraged pride - I will not bend my knees...strong characteristic.

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

Getting addicted to the undercurrent..well written

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Stefanie Fontker 15 September 2011

Passionate, your unwillingness to bow down is a representation of your strong character. Very good.

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