Does he know? , I’m dependent on him, When he falters, So do I, ... Read full text
Other than your use of commas at the end of every line, I really like this poem. It's well composed, honest, courageous and poignant. Well done.
Nicely written! the message really got to me.
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8/2/2025 8:03:29 AM # 1.0.0
Other than your use of commas at the end of every line, I really like this poem. It's well composed, honest, courageous and poignant. Well done.