Friday, September 17, 2010

Addicted To Him Comments

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Does he know? ,
I’m dependent on him,
When he falters,
So do I,
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Bert Bell 08 October 2010

Other than your use of commas at the end of every line, I really like this poem. It's well composed, honest, courageous and poignant. Well done.

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Ali Jafri 17 September 2010

Nicely written! the message really got to me.

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