Friday, February 1, 2013

Addicted Comments

Rating: 4.0

ADDICTED
why?
why would you make me fall in love with you...
why would you lay down and be my first man to have sex with..
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Khairul Ahsan 16 April 2014

'How could you look another girl in the eyes and not think of me? ' - The best line of the poem. The title is good.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 March 2013

Oh nooh doleful soulful but see what an imaginative fiery poem it turnd out to b. Fickle luv is common. D last stanza is remarkably gud!

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Colin Bradley 01 February 2013

beautifully written full of emotions

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