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This is a nice poem with a good flow, Joan Mateo. But I would also do a grammar check, I would start the sentence with a capital letter, to show where a statement starts and where it ends. I would also put comas, in order to emphasize certain ideas, etc. A good poem, just needs a little bit of corrections to improve it. Keep up the good work. And I kindly invite you to read my poems as well :)) ~Besa