Friday, July 16, 2010

Addicted Comments

Rating: 5.0

[Written July 14th 2010]

How can I help myself,
Because I'm starting to fall.
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Keli Mims
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Diamond Williams 26 July 2010

I love it...The poem can go for any situation...you just don't know how addicted you are to something until you try to live without it...Whenever you have time plz read my new suspense poem 'Little Johnny'

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loNeLY AnGel 16 July 2010

very well written poem.. i like it., :)

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David Beckham 16 July 2010

This is well written. The sense of submission from the opening line, 'How can I help myself because I am starting....' is very moving. Well done

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Loved the last line of every stanza. Increasing state of addiction. Addicted to love. A wonderful poem! ; D

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Keli Mims

Keli Mims

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