[Written July 14th 2010]
How can I help myself,
Because I'm starting to fall.
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This is well written. The sense of submission from the opening line, 'How can I help myself because I am starting....' is very moving. Well done
Loved the last line of every stanza. Increasing state of addiction. Addicted to love. A wonderful poem! ; D
I love it...The poem can go for any situation...you just don't know how addicted you are to something until you try to live without it...Whenever you have time plz read my new suspense poem 'Little Johnny'