Oh sure...
It started innocently enough
In the beginning
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As this will be comment number 33 on this poem I hardly think I can give any new insightful praise, so yes this is good, with a cherry on top.
Yeah true, it is like that with all poets world does exist outside their's beautiful idea and composition 10
Oh this is so good! I've got it bad too.... Shhhhaaaakkkiinngggg.. walking along with paper and pencil in pocket... musen't miss a word or phrase... Point, simile or idea...... Need to take a disperin! R.
Good poem about addiction Dee very clever indeed, good work
I don't think i've ever heard addiction described so eloquently. nice to see you felt it was the 'puter, and not the poetry, that had to go, but it didn't, now, did it? Remember, not all addictions need to be treated
Nice Dee. I can relate... especially after burning a couple sausage pieces on the grill yesterday because I was distracted by the PC. Zen
Ahh this is great, a little humor for us poets, but there are those that really do have a problem, I for one, have those fragments of verse mulling around in my mind. Can't sleep at night, sometimes I drive people crazy always ending my sentences in rhyme. Oh my gosh, I need help, have to see a poem counseller. LOLOL. Love your poem Dee, fabulous.---Melvina---
Dee, this was really great. That side swipe of humour really brought a smile to my face. I just loved it. From the comments you've received a lot of others did as well. Gave it my 10. Thanks for sharing it. David
Enjoyable read funny, but that’s how it happens give or take a few side trips
You have a wonderful sense of humor...this is great! ! ! ! !
That was a great poem Dee, but lets hope theres no more need for an intervention. Smiles N Hugs, Willow: -)
Holy cow, I've been on a bender here now for hours. My head is starting to hurt. Definitely relate, love the metaphor. -chuck
Great write, Dee... this one hits close to home! Well done! ! Brian
Fab! ! ! I totally know what you mean! ! I love this, in fact I think we were concurring on this very theme.... great write Dee.. HG: -) xx
Oh my Dee, this is super, you are definitely right, yes you hit the nail on the head. I know for certain, I'm addicted. I wish I could write 50 poems a day, I must try that. Thanks again Dee for your wonderful poems.--Melvina--
I know the feeling so well my two dogs come and collect me when they want to go 10 Chris