Thursday, January 25, 2007

Addicted Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh sure...
It started innocently enough

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Dee Daffodil
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Kris Smith 23 September 2008

I know the feeling so well my two dogs come and collect me when they want to go 10 Chris

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ngaio beck 11 September 2008

Boy are you 'on the money'! (This had to be written) .

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Matt Johnston 09 September 2008

As this will be comment number 33 on this poem I hardly think I can give any new insightful praise, so yes this is good, with a cherry on top.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 29 August 2008

Yeah true, it is like that with all poets world does exist outside their's beautiful idea and composition 10

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Saint Cynosure 19 August 2008

Dee this is fantastic, smiles for miles...

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Roger Cornish 08 March 2008

Oh this is so good! I've got it bad too.... Shhhhaaaakkkiinngggg.. walking along with paper and pencil in pocket... musen't miss a word or phrase... Point, simile or idea...... Need to take a disperin! R.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

we're all addicted to something in life.

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Francis Duggan 25 December 2007

Good poem about addiction Dee very clever indeed, good work

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Chris Mendros 05 September 2007

I don't think i've ever heard addiction described so eloquently. nice to see you felt it was the 'puter, and not the poetry, that had to go, but it didn't, now, did it? Remember, not all addictions need to be treated

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Zen Bojczuk 26 June 2007

Nice Dee. I can relate... especially after burning a couple sausage pieces on the grill yesterday because I was distracted by the PC. Zen

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Melvina Germain 29 April 2007

Ahh this is great, a little humor for us poets, but there are those that really do have a problem, I for one, have those fragments of verse mulling around in my mind. Can't sleep at night, sometimes I drive people crazy always ending my sentences in rhyme. Oh my gosh, I need help, have to see a poem counseller. LOLOL. Love your poem Dee, fabulous.---Melvina---

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David Harris 10 March 2007

Dee, this was really great. That side swipe of humour really brought a smile to my face. I just loved it. From the comments you've received a lot of others did as well. Gave it my 10. Thanks for sharing it. David

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fanniesson - 07 February 2007

Enjoyable read funny, but that’s how it happens give or take a few side trips

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C.R. Ebowski 07 February 2007

You have a wonderful sense of humor...this is great! ! ! ! !

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 04 February 2007

That was a great poem Dee, but lets hope theres no more need for an intervention. Smiles N Hugs, Willow: -)

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Chuck Audette 01 February 2007

Holy cow, I've been on a bender here now for hours. My head is starting to hurt. Definitely relate, love the metaphor. -chuck

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Darla Holt 31 January 2007

I love it. This is very creative and entertaining.

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Brian Dorn 30 January 2007

Great write, Dee... this one hits close to home! Well done! ! Brian

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Original Unknown Girl 30 January 2007

Fab! ! ! I totally know what you mean! ! I love this, in fact I think we were concurring on this very theme.... great write Dee.. HG: -) xx

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Melvina Germain 28 January 2007

Oh my Dee, this is super, you are definitely right, yes you hit the nail on the head. I know for certain, I'm addicted. I wish I could write 50 poems a day, I must try that. Thanks again Dee for your wonderful poems.--Melvina--

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