Friday, June 12, 2020

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A-lways in a self
D-estructive state because of
D-oing what you love most
I-t's like reaching heaven but
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Sophie Allyah
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Chinedu Dike 27 August 2020

A concise and poignant bit of verse elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. Focused and factual.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 June 2020

Addiction attacks Destroys destiny Destines death Inside intestine Combining core The taste (of last breath) - Di-crostica

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andrew 20 June 2020

nice one you should write more acrostic form

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 June 2020

because of D-oing what you love most I-t's like reaching heaven but... closer to.......addiction and its results. tony

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andrew 20 June 2020

Thanks Dr Tony I really appreciate your comments and reading my poems

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 June 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Andrew E. B. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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andrew 20 June 2020

Sorry for the late reply okay I will. Thanks for the comment

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Sophie Allyah

Sophie Allyah

Iloilo City Philippines
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