Saturday, January 18, 2014

Addict Comments

Rating: 3.5

Uncontrollably crying
because of the life you've lead
you're an addict, dad
its the fact I've pushed
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Nika McGuin
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 12 May 2014

compelling and thought-provoking!

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Daniel Brick 22 February 2014

Hello, Nika This is such an honest and heart-felt poem it hardly needs a comment. Everything that has to be said you have already said. I noticed in your note you assured your dad you're not mad. That is exactly the sentiment I felt reading the poem. The poem is filled with sympathy and understanding. It is a quiet poem: no raised voice, no blame. This is the kind of poem that makes the writer (that is, you) stronger and hopefully your father too. And it conveyed its strength to me as a sympathetic observer looking in.

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Shelley Stanworth 01 February 2014

Thank you for this. Often felt the same way.

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Nika McGuin

Nika McGuin

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