A haunting image touched my dreams of a lost bird of many colours
that sings from its heart and beckons me to hear its honey-bluesy song.
When I try to look it stares back at me with black, beady eyes,
plumaged in turquoise, teal, bronze, emerald green and purple
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Beautiful. You take the reader on a trip of wonder and vision. It is full of dreamy kinda thoughts. I can acutually see the colors displayed. DC
Wow! and goodness me what a long and wonderful piece of writing. Your spiritual journey amazing and colors and imagery woven right throughout. It seems you are a very evolved soul in this dimension and your dream interpretation is stunning. 10 Karin Anderson
Holy cow that was long, and you know what, you didn't lose me at one bit. That's a great ability you know. I really enjoyed the imagery in this poem.
Sounds like a message from your true Self. A 'big' dream sent to you from the gods that dwell within.
Added dimensions.... I personaly feel you have portrayed a beautiful image and combination of excellent skill of poetic sense dream as real as going before me......I want to take it as my favourite.......
Very well done Lorraine...., sounds like a 'Lorraine classic' to me. I was young when I started reading it....! ! ! Regards, Trade.
No doubt, its an another dimension totally out of this world.Its like super nova kinda thing.I really enjoyed the intriguing journey, of course with your guidance so that i'd not have lost in the Heaven you owned.Marvellous writes Lorraine! !
An extraordinary experience which you have artistically portrayed. I will need to reread it to savor all the particulars of how you describe things and relate your toughts and feelings. Dreams do have meaning, not always easy to decipher, but you have uncovered the true meaning of this one. Thanks for sharing.
Wow, this is amazing. You have truly visited the heavens and returned to tell us all about it. It is also interesting that you mention the Crystal Star. I have written a poem about my daughter who died recently - her name was Crystal and the poem is called 'The Crystal Star'. Thank you for sharing this personal experience with us.